Here's some stories I've writen for English 11H, or Creative
Writing/Journalism 12.
(Please note: McDonald's is, in no way, tied to these stories. They are
completly fictional - right down to the characters - and any resembelance
is completly coincidental)
----------Oh my god! There was a man walking through
the door. She felt her heart
start beating wildly. He was a trencher. And he had some trencher friends.
Crap. Five other men walked through the door behind the first. Each one
was dressed in black some wild eye makeup and heavy chains; all with
trench coats. One had a backpack; another a cane. She looked around for
help Darren was across the lobby... that was a small comfort. Lysa was in
back swearing at Howie as usual... she wouldn't be much help anyway - she
was too damn prissy. Mitch was downstairs, but would he have time to make
it back up if there was a problem? Why was she so scared? She had no
reason to believe they would hurt her.. Yet here she was, worrying 'if
this' and 'if that'. She told herself to stop being so silly.
---------- Thud. Thud. Thud. Their dark army boots
hit the linoleum hard.
What
was that guy carrying? God damn it! They were gonna hurt her. She was
certain of this. Like the time at her school when the trencher burned that
girl. She had heard a lot of stories about the horrible things trenchers
do: their 'initiations', gang fights animal killing... of course, she had
never witnessed any of this but that was beside the point. Conrad had told
her about the time he had caught some trenchers in the bathroom
dismembering a cat and he never told her anything but the truth...
---------- The men stopped to talk to a few girls
sitting a few meters from
the counter. Could she maybe take her break, and let someone else deal
with these guys? No, she had just got there and everyone else was busy...
What was she talking about? She was a big girl she could handle it All
she'd have to do was treat them like anyone else, and if they started in
on her she could run around behind the various machines lined up in the
back. Maybe by then Darren would finish trying to look all big out front
and come save her... What? Treat them like humans? What was she thinking?
These were Satan-worshipping, baby-killing freaks of nature!
---------- The men finished talking to their friends
and were on their way
again. OK she was going to die. That was that. She tried to console
herself with happy thoughts of meeting her favourite rapper and all-around
hero Tupac in heaven when they reached the till. "Excuse me? Miss....um...
Karen?" one of them spoke, reading her nametag. She quickly looked up, and
speaking loudly so Byron wouldn't forget she was there, said, "Welcome to
McDonald's! How may I help you?"... Random thoughts were running through
her head. One of them was going to pull a gun, or a knife... Maybe order a
dog burger with extra blood... Brainwash her into becoming one of them...
Who knows what these guys are capable of?
---------- The trencher spoke again. "Um... yeah..
Could we please get..," he
pulled the object out from behind his back, "..a refill?.. oh,
cheeseburgers are cheap today, right? So could I please get three
cheeseburgers, and a large fry?"
---------- Karen let out a sigh of relief. They
weren't going to kill him.
They just wanted to eat! "That'll be three ninety one, please sir! Will
that be for here or to go?" These guys were completely fine! What was she
worrying about? The trencher looked at his friends. "Um... here..," he
handed her a five dollar bill "You can keep the change."
---------- Here she was worrying about these
trenchers KILLING her, when they
were GIVING her money! What was her problem? "Yo Karen!" Conrad yelled at
her. "Those trenchers giving you a hard time?? Damn trenchers always
causing problems..." Karen made a mental note to lecture Conrad on his
manners.
----------The door swung open with
a squeak. She gazed into the bright bathroom... all the stalls were empty.
She quickly scooted into the door, and fumbled with the lock in her haste.
After she sat down on the toilet seat, she rolled up her mud-caked sleeve.
Her thin arm was covered with dark bruises and small scabs. She opened her
purse, pulled a dirty syringe, and a small vial. Jamming the needle into
the rubber top, she sucked some of the liquid into the glass, and set the
syringe down on top of the toilet paper dispenser. She tied a piece of
cloth around her arm above her elbow, and found a vien. The thin metal
slid slowly into her skin, and a look of bliss came across her gaunt
face.
----------She lay in a crumpled
heap around the toilet, with her face facing towards the heavens, her eyes
glazed, and mouth hanging slightly open. Darren was now at Conrad's side,
staring, unsure of what to do. "First things first." muttered Conrad,
reaching for the girl's neck to feel for a pulse. Suddenly he felt
something stab into the tip of his finger. "Fuck!" he exclaimed, and
grabbed the hard object. "A fucking syringe! It stabbed me!". Darren just
stood there, frozen and useless. Conrad tossed the syringe aside, and
placed his fingers on the girl's neck.. no pulse. Her skin was a little
too cold, a little too clammy. He snatched his hand back, and contemplated
his next move, feeling an unexplainable urge to help this girl. It seemed
like hours has passes... had anyone called 9-1-1? As if in response to his
thoughts, the door slammed open, and in burst 4 paramedics, and the fat
lady, complete with stretcher, and various bags. One ushered Darren and
the lady back into the hall, another pulled Conrad aside. "What happened?"
he asked in a soothing voice, with one hand on Conrad's shoulder. Conrad
explained the events in a rush, and showed the attendant his poked finger.
----------While the man cleaned
his cut out, Conrad watched the other two attendants attempt to
resessutate the girl with electric paddles. Finally, on the third attempt,
they got a small, but significant, heartbeat. They loaded the girl onto
the stretcher, and carefully wheeled her out. The attendant cleaning
Conrad's hand bandaged it, then asked if there was somewhere private where
they could talk. Conrad led him towards the back of the restaurant, while
police officers moved into the bathroom. They paused to watch the
screaming ambulance leave, then continued down the back stairs to the
manager's office, below the main kitchen. They sat down in the swivel
chairs, and the paramedic spoke.
----------"Well, sir, I am sure
this has been very strenuous for you, and I'm sure you are anxious to get
home and relax, but I think there is something you should know. That
woman, Candy, was a drug user, well-known by our police force. She is a
chronic user, and today she overdosed - again. But, um, well, you got
stabbed byher needle... there is a chance you could have contracted her
HIV virus."
This is hopefully going to end up as a novel!